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Hooks That Make Readers Stay

Start strong and ditch the slow build.

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C. L. Nichols
Aug 16, 2025
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Pick up a book, flip to the first page, and read. “The blood was still warm on her hands.”

That sentence is a demand. Keep reading.

A powerful first sentence locks readers in instantly. It raises questions, sparks curiosity, and sets the tone. Instead of easing them into your story, you pull them straight into a moment of tension, mystery, or surprise. No…

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